The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map gives information about the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary school since its erraction in 1950.
Overall,it is clear that the main road was stable it is place over the time.Besides,over a sixty-years period from 1950 and 2010,school is extended while the house area is demolished in the school was layout diagram.
In 1950,there were three houses, school was located near the home.However,it is replaced by other buildings is that Science block and car park in 1980.In addition,farmland is also replaced sports field in 1980.From 1980 to 2010,the school was layout diagram change in size of some area.The sports field was reduced in 2010.Then the car park area was organized.The playground did not change at all inthe 1950s and 1980s but was reduced by 2010.Furthermore sports field was reduced by 2010.In contrast the main road remained unchanged throughout the period.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 61
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 79
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, second, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22068965517 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08342968859 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.023121678 43.030603864 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.333333333 112.824112599 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3333333333 22.9334400587 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.3333333333 5.23603664747 579% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227459278822 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231390899196 0.103423049105 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160701604461 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231390899196 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160701604461 0.0819641961636 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.2329268293 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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