The chart below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 20 and future projections for 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates Southland’s global exports in 2000, 2021, and predicting projections for 2025

Overall, in 2025 meat products than compared years it is almost 5 billion pounds of sterling, the international tourism in 2025 is considering be the highest but nowadays dairy products is leading almost 10 billion of pounds.

Export in international tourism was high in 2000 to be exact it is about 8.3 billions of pound but the lowest production exported was meat, it was 6 billion of pounds and normal sold was in dairy products about 7 billion of pounds. Coming to 2021 there is sharply increase in exporting dairy products it is 10 billions of pounds, international tourism is more productive compared to 21 years ago, but in meat products slightly decrease it half billion of pounds less than 2000 . In 2025 the leading will be international tourism it will be about 10 billion of pounds but there will be decrease in export of meat and there will be another decrease on dairy products and it is 500 million pounds less than in 2021

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 billion'.
Suggestion: 3 billion
... high in 2000 to be exact it is about 8.3 billions of pound but the lowest production exporte...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...it half billion of pounds less than 2000 . In 2025 the leading will be internation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77999911182 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435754189944 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9900902658 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 217.0 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.75 22.9334400587 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960602837576 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718470916417 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441982525426 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119152407555 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100538494704 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.2 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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