One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing
There is huge improvement in medical aspect compared to generation ago one of the proof is humans are dwelling longer and life needs are rising.
Medical improvement is good but on the other hand the people who is ill can be treated even if he is cancer that is why population of earth is increasing rapidly, it is almost seven and half billion humanities who are living at the moment .This can bring millions of global problems such as air pollution, water pollution, and so on. Including that if the number of people is increasing in this temp, after fifty years number of people would be just over 10 billion and waste of water would be global problem. Even air would not be enough for dwellers and creatures too.
However, it is good that the diseases like cancer, tuberculosis and other diseases which could not be treated now have a possible solves. The people who have faced to these serious illnesses will not be panicky because they know that it can be cured easy. I have my own experience: the friend of mine had an illness of cancer he knew it when he was running, suddenly he had a terrible headache and he became pale and we led him to hospital and the doctor came to his parents and said that he was cancer and he admitted not to worry because this disease can be treated and they were happy hearing this.
To conclude, I think the advantages weigh more than disadvantages and we are living now there is nothing worry about 100 years after because we could not reach to this age to live enjoying and with no disease is much better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49116607774 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36285078697 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0982487571 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.571428571 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4285714286 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145722270859 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079559555144 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802012550252 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110918891509 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880589641675 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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