The chart below gives the information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 to 2010

The best rating was 42 percent and it belongs the peoples of between the age 26-35 in the 1990`s years and then it had been worse. In the 2010`s years the percentage was worse than 1990`s years. The difference between the both periods is 7 percent.

The lowest signpost illustrated on the chart of 18-25. In the 1990`s years the percentage formed 15% then this rating worsened in the 2010`s years. The cause of the lowest rating is the most of peoples who at the age of between 18-25 are unemployed.

The second illustration shows the rating of the peoples between 26 and 35 ages and it illustrates better percentage than the lowest signpost. In the 1990`s years the percentage was 30 and it was equal to the rating of the peoples who older than 65 years and then the rating has decreased to 20 percent for the next years.

The bar chart demonstrates the best rating of the peoples between the age of 51 and 55 in the 2010`s years. The rating increased after 1990.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The best rating was 42 percent and it belongs the peoples of be...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the peoples') or simply say ''most peoples''.
Suggestion: most of the peoples; most peoples
.... The cause of the lowest rating is the most of peoples who at the age of between 18-25 are une...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. The rating increased after 1990.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76704545455 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67694448327 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426136363636 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5484006447 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21327547166 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101763785526 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508000213506 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159325314581 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00603749834777 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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