The chart below gives some information about the growth of the urban population in certain parts of the world (including the prediction of the future). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted bar graph illustrates the proportion of urbanization growth in Africa, Asia, Latin America/Caribbean and the whole world for three specific periods (1950, 2000 and 2030).
As an overall trend, worldwide population density experiences a significant surge over a 35-year period. While Latin America witnesses the highest urbanization percentage, Asia sees a dramatic rise with regards to its primary urban population.
In 1950, 30 % of people all over the world tended to live in towns and cities, while this figure for less developed countries in Africa was lower (just over 10 percent of people chose urbanism). However from 1950 onwards, Africa witnessed a sharp increase in urban population density so that the percentage of urban population of Africa has been envisaged to be approximately 52 % by 2030; this figure for the whole word urban population is expected to be exactly 60 %.
Urban population of Latin America in 1950 was roughly 3 folds greater than Asia’s, 41% and 14% respectively. It has been predicted that the proportion of people who live in towns and cities in Latin America will lead by a margin of 24% with respect to the urban Asian people, 80 % and 56 % respectively, in 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...er 10 percent of people chose urbanism. However from 1950 onwards, Africa witnessed a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9382822176 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3810547434 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.857142857 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102550498688 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503853130152 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235518677404 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654622743435 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00822989313951 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.