The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Asbhy) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The provided pie chart represents the proportion of inhabitant aged 23-65 in various constitutes in one UK urban area (Asbhy) and in the UK as a whole in the year 2008.
As can be observed by the pie charts, residents in two figures account for a vast proportion in both Personal Services and Office Work sector. In details, in the UK, the highest proportion of Office Work was in 2008 with 19%. It is notable that, Unemployed and Construction shared the same percentage of 17%. With regards to Asbhy, the proportion of Office Work was highest in 2008 with 21% while the lowest percentage of Professional Wok was in 2008 with 8%.
Attention should be drawn to similarities between two figures. In particular, Professional Wok in two figures shared the same percentage of 10%. Besides, Office Work in both Asbhy and the UK were similar to 18% and 19% in the other given.
- It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living far from home? 61
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23 65 in different occupations in one UK town Asbhy and in the UK as a whole in 2008 73
- The line chart shows the total spending of five different categories, in percentage, in a European country from 1960 to 2000 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72549019608 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75150202282 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5744104532 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23640293873 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101098913459 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127608040722 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200108786345 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154802648753 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.