The chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australian cities.
The chart given depicts the consumption of coffee and tea and the way people drink it in 5 Australian cities in a month, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Most strikingly, coffee shops are the most popular way of drinking coffee in those cities, except for Adelaide while buying fresh coffee is the least used way.
As far as the statistics is concerned, a large number of dwellers in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart tend to keen on arriving to a café for coffee and tea, with more than 60% of respondents. In addition, more than 50% of people in Brisbane choose to buy instant coffee in 1 month, this figure is nearly 50% for Adelaide and roughly 55% for Hobart.
Regarding the remainder, buying fresh coffee seems to be less popular than 2 methods above, with no more than 45% residents go for this way. The figure of this method in Adelaide and Brisbane share similar percentage at around 34, lower than those in Sydney and Melbourne, being 44% and 42%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... As far as the statistics is concerned, a large number of dwellers in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, well, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76878612717 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53379707858 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 15.3297097168 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 137.5 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190769590029 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106235334855 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907267801369 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141258894739 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913072753524 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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