The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write the report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Leisure time in a typical week in hour - by sex and employment status,1998-1999.
The rendered bar graph depicts the number of leisure hours spent by males and females in a typical week in various vocational status over the period of 1998 to 1999.
With regard to men, unemployed men spent maximum hours in leisure time and this was followed by retired males. The respective figures for these categories were around 85 and 83 hours per week. Whereas womem comprised of about 78 hours in a week which was there highest enjoyment time in both unemployed and retired status.
Men emloyer who did full time job had approximately 44 hours of leisure activities on an average a week which was six hours more than leisure hours enjoyed by females in this category. In contrast, there were no case witnessed for men regarding employed part time and househusband while the participation of part time employer women in leisure activities was 40 hours. Fifty hours were spent by housewives on leisure time which was higher than employed women.
To sum up, males had maximum leisure time in all categories than women and employed people had less for leisure activities than retired and unemployed people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'there the highest'.
Suggestion: there the highest
...d of about 78 hours in a week which was there highest enjoyment time in both unemployed and r...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... retired status. Men emloyer who did full time job had approximately 44 hours of leisu...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...se witnessed for men regarding employed part time and househusband while the participatio...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...househusband while the participation of part time employer women in leisure activities wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while, in contrast, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52842598883 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2197592876 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371022955402 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178861736861 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046475359068 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224442195433 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562382789435 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.