Some people think unpaid community service should be made compulsory part of high school program.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Making young minds to unsalaried community service during their schooling is highly recommended by some demographics of society. While questions have been raised about its disastrous consequence, I strongly argue with this suggestion.
It is fairly easy to comprehend why I am in agreement with this recommendation. This is simply because the unremunerative social services will work wonders inculcating essence of responsibility in children. When students are made realised how their little individual endeavour can help others in long run, they will start evoking their interest in participating charitable work; consequently, they will regard it as their responsibility which they have to bear even often passing out from school. To illustrate if pupils are in encoveraded to engage in NSS camp in school hours, they will not only learn the importance of cleanliness but also learn not to little in open spaces. Thus, making it mandatory for all school going children to get involved in voluntary services will assist them to become responsible counterparts of society.
Additionally,as learners have to read a wide range of subjects in school curriculum, they find it really frustrating and tedious-task to get acquainted with all these disciplines; resultantly, they might feel stress and exhaustion of their studies. In order to counter stress, school officials should motivate learns to participate in social welfare schemes which will prove harmonious. Being a member of social sports service, learner will get some time to remove academic pressure and enjoy the some interesting job with team mates which can even become a lifetime memory. In short, it is a great idea to introduce voluntary programme as a mendatory part of school curriculum because it can be beneficial to save youngsters from academic stress.
Conclusively, thought compulsion of unsalaried social service seem unfair to some, i would argue it will be extremely advantageous to make youngsters accountable and stress free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, really, so, thus, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39677419355 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03912914028 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 310.0 20.2975951904 1527% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1673.0 106.682146367 1568% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 310.0 20.7667163134 1493% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 62.0 7.06120827912 878% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138506665589 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138506665589 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932056849039 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254480023904 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 159.0 13.0946893788 1214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -251.63 50.2224549098 -501% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.4 11.3001002004 1110% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.52 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.34 8.58950901804 272% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.0 10.1190380762 1245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 126.0 10.7795591182 1169% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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