The bar chart illustrates how the value of rentals and sales of movies have changed whithin a specific store between 2002 and 2011. Overall, rentals number have dramatically decreased while sales number have shown a mixed behaviour, showing a format which vanished whilst another started too be sold.
Rentals amount has had a steady decrease since 2002 when reached a peak at over 180.000, to 2011 where dropped to the lowest value at almost 60.000. This trend was followed by VHS sales number, which had the highest value in 2002 at over 80.000 but since 2006 it has dissapeared in that store.
Otherwise, talking about blue-ray and VHS sales format, the last one had a rocket between 2002 and 2004, when it triplicated his value at over 170.000. From there to the next three years it had a slightly increase, peacked ar over 210.000 in 2007. The same year a format which were not sold before, blu-ray, initiated his appearance in that store depicting an amount at under 10.000. However, from 2007 to 2011 while blu-ray sales had a steady and slightly increase, DVD sales has begun to decrease by almost 30.000 to the last year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to be'?
Suggestion: to be
...t which vanished whilst another started too be sold. Rentals amount has had a stead...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...that store. Otherwise, talking about blue-ray and VHS sales format, the last one had ...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...om there to the next three years it had a slightly increase, peacked ar over 210.000 in 2007. The s...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...ar a format which were not sold before, blu-ray, initiated his appearance in that store...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...0.000. However, from 2007 to 2011 while blu-ray sales had a steady and slightly increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8112244898 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31865723791 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.9902319896 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19446850284 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971601505017 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519739342307 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1460848433 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539064093369 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.