The chart below shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of two air pollutants in four big cities in 2000. (Unit: microgram per m3
The bar charts below compare the average highest and lowest amount of SO2 and N2O in four big cities, which are Los Angeles, Calcutta, Beijing, Mexico in 2000.
Overall, it is apparent that Mexico was the most contaminated city among four cities examined,with the highest levels of SO2 and N2O. Conversely, the amount of SO2 in Los Angeles was negligible, whereas both Calcutta and Beijing registered lower levels of dinitrous oxide.
In 2000, Los Angeles witnessed the lowest daily amount of SO2 discharged among 4 cities, with the minimum average of 1 microgram per m3 and a maximum average ten times as much, at 10 micrograms per m3. Additionally, the level of N2O was much higher with the maximum daily average amount at 104 micrograms per m3, which far exceeded the minimum level of sulfur dioxide. A similar pattern of air pollutants emitted was observed in Mexico, with the figures for maximum and minimum dinitrous oxide dwarfing that of sulfur oxide, at 207 and 113 micrograms per m3 to 200 and 80, respectively.
Conversely, the amount of the highest and lowest N2O in Calcutta and Beijing was less than that of SO2. The levels of maximum and minimum SO2 in Beijing roughly surpassed that of N2O, at 130 and 25 micrograms per m3 to 54 and 14 micrograms per m3. The figures of Calcutta witnessed a relatively similar pattern with 59 to 52 micrograms per m3 for the maximum and 47 to 30 micrograms per m3 for the minimum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76305220884 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67891655822 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461847389558 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.7757061492 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390882091968 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176081583717 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101146660302 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224923171032 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957388319232 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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