The chart below shows the changes in car ownership in Great Britain between 1961 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of British families owning no car, one car and two or more cars over
the period 1961 to 2001.Overall, the percentage of people who owned no car or one car decreased, while the rate of
households had two or more cars increased significantly during the period shown.
In 1961, British families who had no car and one car accounted for approximately 65% and 35% respectively, whereas there
were no families owned two or more cars. Over the following 20 years, the percentage of families owning one car saw a
sharp increase, with the highest level of 50%. By contrast, the percentage of those who had no car decreased significantly
by nearly one third. During the same period, as can be seen from the graph, the rate of households owning two or more
cars climbed to about 15%.
Between 1981 and 2001, the proportion of families owning two or more cars rose enormously to nearly 30%, while the
figure of those without a car dropped steadily to less than 30%. Families who had one car were still top, but the proportion
showed a slight decline, with about 45% of the total by 2001.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., one car and two or more cars over the period 1961 to 2001. Overall, the pe...
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...ed, while the rate of households had two or more cars increased significantly...
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... and 35% respectively, whereas there were no families owned two or more cars. Ove...
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...centage of families owning one car saw a sharp increase, with the highest level o...
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...e who had no car decreased significantly by nearly one third. During the same per...
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...he rate of households owning two or more cars climbed to about 15%. Between 19...
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...te of households owning two or more cars climbed to about 15%. Between 1981 a...
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...rose enormously to nearly 30%, while the figure of those without a car dropped st...
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...enormously to nearly 30%, while the figure of those without a car dropped steadily...
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...e car were still top, but the proportion showed a marginal decline, with about 45...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86138613861 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5946261946 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1727689977 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130779445518 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744494676198 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050313243484 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700661928689 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446512162141 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.