The Bar graph elucidates various crime places in the city centre of Manchester
Overall, It is found that from 2001 to 2012, The count of burglary cases almost plummeted. While the car theft cases raised to a certain extent. However, robbery cases remained almost stable throughout the years.
Initially, When the burglary is considered it was about 3400 cases in 2003 which raised by 10% and reached 3800 by the next year. From then, There is continous decrease in the cases reaching the lowest in 2008 and the count is 1000. Later followed an uneven pattern from then on wards with slight changes. Nextly , when the car theft cases are taken in account, Initially, the number was 2250 in 2003 which remained same till 2005 with minor changes later reduced to 2000 by 2008. it again raised continously with a zigzag pattern and finally by 2012, The car robbery increased by 20 percent and reached 2750 cases. On the other hand, When house robbery is considered their number doubled from 500 to 1000 from 20003 to 2005. Afterwards it reduced to half by 2006.Which remained stable until 2009. However, slight rise and fall thereafter is noticed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86224489796 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29309067319 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1481353087 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13753361959 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468204109986 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623279223748 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119309458844 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731252019498 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.