The process illustrates the various steps involved in processing the cement and concrete which are used in construction purpose.
Overall, It is found that cement production involves several steps like Crushing, Mixing, Heating and Grinding. However, Concrete production involves concrete mixing of its ingredients.
Initially, Limestone and clay are made into powder in a crusher; Later, passed through a mixer and a rotating heater in which heat is supplied from an external source. The mix is then passed through a grinder and the final product produced is cement. It is now packed in various types of bags for transportation purpose.
In concrete production cement (15%)is mixed with water( 10%)together form one-fourth of the total volume. Sand is added by 25% of total amount. Along with this, Gravel ( small stones) is added for about half of the total volume. The whole mixture is placed in a concrete mixer which rotates in anticlockwise direction. The final product produced is concrete.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37974683544 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.764917443 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7375650222 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2727272727 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14732073942 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574578833703 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548332176702 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103663550243 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594611989516 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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