The line graph shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
Overall, car theft and burglary was more than robbery.
The burglary ,was more in 2003, they number was 3500 and in 2004 ,they began more but beginning in 2005 they number becomes decrease. In 2006 the number of burglary showed about 2700 and in 2007 they decrease more and more and number of burglary was about 1600, also in 2008 was 1100, but in 2009 it rise and showed 1500 and in 2010 they decreased slightly and it was about 1400. In 2011 the number of burglary was 1500 and 2012 it was also 1400.
Car theft beginning with 2003, before 2005 they showed nearly similar number, about 2900-3000, but in 2006 they decrease and showed 2000 and in 2007 it rise by 100 number and showed 2200. In 2008 it decrease very small and number of car theft showed 2000, then in 2009 they rise by 50-100 and showed 2300. In 2010 it also raised and was 2600, in 2011 it was 2500 and in 2012 it was 2900.
Robbery, in 2003 they start by 600 number and before 2005 they raised and showed 900. Began by 2005 to 2008 number of crime decreased by 500 and also in 2010 the number of robbery showed 700, then in 2011 and 2012 this number was 600.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... was more than robbery. The burglary ,was more in 2003, they number was 3500 a...
^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n 2003, they number was 3500 and in 2004 ,they began more but beginning in 2005 th...
^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
..., also in 2008 was 1100, but in 2009 it rise and showed 1500 and in 2010 they decrea...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...decrease and showed 2000 and in 2007 it rise by 100 number and showed 2200. In 2008 ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
... 100 number and showed 2200. In 2008 it decrease very small and number of car theft show...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 6.8 338% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33755274262 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.841596939 2.65546596893 69% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388185654008 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6400035945 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156761912212 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103995043892 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195904020336 0.0843802449381 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174683139004 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.257861545356 0.0819641961636 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... was more than robbery. The burglary ,was more in 2003, they number was 3500 a...
^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n 2003, they number was 3500 and in 2004 ,they began more but beginning in 2005 th...
^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
..., also in 2008 was 1100, but in 2009 it rise and showed 1500 and in 2010 they decrea...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...decrease and showed 2000 and in 2007 it rise by 100 number and showed 2200. In 2008 ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
... 100 number and showed 2200. In 2008 it decrease very small and number of car theft show...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 6.8 338% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33755274262 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.841596939 2.65546596893 69% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388185654008 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6400035945 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156761912212 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103995043892 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195904020336 0.0843802449381 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174683139004 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.257861545356 0.0819641961636 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.