The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumers goods in 2010.
The given chart compares how much money was allocated on five different categories of goods including cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in France and the United State in 2010.
In general, both two nations expended more money on cars than they did on other sectors. However, the amount of consumption of perfume in the UK in 2010 was lowest and the same was true for that of cameras in France.
In France, standing at about £380.000, the spending on computers was roughly £20.000 lower than that on cars, at approximately £400.000. This figure was twice as high as the expenditure perfume, which was accounted for around £200.000. Meanwhile, the quantity of money allocated for cameras was half of the expenditure on books, at roughly £150.000 and £300.000 respectively
In terms of the UK, the expenditure on computers and cameras was nearly the same, at approximately £350.000. Moreover, the amount of money spent on cars accounted for about £450.000, it was followed by that on books and perfume, at roughly £400.000 and £140.000 respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16091954023 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87448261154 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9241990692 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804416428259 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448164743813 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380300764477 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622868308524 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380853381953 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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