the chart below shows how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The pictures demonstrates how often presidents in the USA consume fast food over the course of ten years starting in 2003.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that people have a habit of eating a lot of junk food. In 2003 and 2006 , the tend of going in fast food restaurant once a week resistors the highest figures.
Specifically, 2006 had the amount of people consuming junk food one a weeks stood at 35 percentages of people while this is just 20 percentages of americans spent several times a week in fast food restaurant.In addition, the figures which show the tendency of eating that kind of food once or twice month is only less common than one time per week consuming fast food person .A similar trend was witness in 2003 when people often eating fast food once a week, once or twice a month and several times
In contract, so few people kept healthy lifestyle from 2003 and 2013. there are 15 percentages of uk'residents eating fast food few times a year in 2006 and 2013 while the number of people who never eating junk food decrease at 5 percentages and lower over the 10 years.
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is import 61
- the chart below shows how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 78
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is import 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...a week resistors the highest figures. Specifically, 2006 had the amount of pe...
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...ercentages and lower over the 10 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56281407035 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4899799196 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.324681166 43.030603864 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.6 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288378664446 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165950498109 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491504214182 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19142463061 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118447884349 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.