The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the years 2003-2013.
Overall, it is clear that the largest part of people ate unhealthy meals once a week or once or twice a month during the given period, while junk food was eaten every day or never by the tiny minority of folks.
It can be seen from the graph that the biggest proportion of frequency, more than a quarter, that people chose to eat unhealthy food once a week or once or twice a month between 2003 and 2013. In contrast, the number of frequency of folks eaten junk food every day or never amounted to less than 5 percentage in 2003 and it was followed by a 1% decrease in 2006. However, the number of inhabitants, who eat junk food a few times a year, increased to 15% in the year 2006 and remained the same over the next 7 years. Also, the proportion of frequency of eating fast food among people who were eaten fast food at least several times a week made up nearly a fifth in the years 2003-2013.
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both th 78
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- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 73
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 73
- In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?Give reasons for your answer and include an 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, at least, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38659793814 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40045187407 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.4265993169 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27243067899 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149915188733 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108627044687 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208552487557 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105543092176 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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