the chart below shows the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in summarize the information by reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below enumerates the percentage data on the variation of housing rents in five different cities for two-time period of five years in 1990 to 2002 with comparison 1989.As an over all trends since 1990-1995 three out of five cities houses prices deteriorate as compared to 1989 while only two cities rise insignificantly. However, in second half of five years all cities housing prices upsurge except one.
Firstly between 1990 to 2002 percentage of housing plummet greatly about -7% for Tokyo and London with respect to one year earlier.Meanwhile,USA percentage drop but less than Japan and UK exactly -5%.However,in Spain and Germany this percentage improved but insignificantly about two percent.
Although,in second half of decade from 1996-2002 percentage of London skyrocketed to twelve percent about twenty fold high with comparison fist five years.Only the Japan that average also plunge but two percent less than previous five years.Another city Frankfort show collapse of about one percent with compared to 1995.At the same time New York present leap of ten percent and Madrid rise of one percent with comparison past years.
In the short with comparison 1989 shows decline of percentages in prices of housing till 1995,but onward up to 2002 prices shoot up in most of the cities.
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ascompletely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learningand taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? 56
- The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summaries the information by reporting the main features and make comparison where possible. 78
- in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.what do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 78
- Some people claim that not enough of waste from home is recycled. they say that the only way to increase the recycling is for government to make legal requirement.To what extend that laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. 78
- the given maps show the access point to city hospital in 2007 and 2010.summaries the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rs in 1990 to 2002 with comparison 1989.As an over all trends since 1990-1995 thre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25961538462 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90467385045 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.110191431 43.030603864 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.8 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 5.23603664747 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320055163665 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183853978223 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608060016023 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191568447126 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737514967378 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.