The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries

Essay topics:

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The information given by the chart is about the issues people have when relocating overseas and the variety of problems depending on their age groups.
According to the chart, the biggest challenge for the youngest age group (18 to 34) is establishing a friendship, at about 46 percent. Meanwhile, the percentage of people in this group who have problem finding a place to stay is less than 6 percent and only 29 percent of them find it hard to study the area language.
In contrast to the young group, learning a new language is the most problematic for the elderly at around 55 percent (nearly double of the younger). However, only over 22 percent of people in this group have trouble forming relationships and finding accommodation.
Compared with the other two age groups, middle age people (35 to 54) do not have much difference in the issues they face. The most significant problem for people in this group is locating housing with 39 percent, while the other troubles are only less than 3 percent and 4 percent respectively.
Overall, the middle-age group has to solve all problems the most and the proportion of older people who have difficulty understanding language is much higher than the others.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as to, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85436893204 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76506490668 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9726406555 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216496969716 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108202715232 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083589255057 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143319063916 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887117966417 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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