the chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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the chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates 3 kinds of problem that different age groups face up when they living overseas.

On one hand, finding schools for their offsprings seems to be the least problematic issue for all age-groups. While least than 5 percent oldest group (people over 55) and roughly 18 percent the middle age-group (aged 35-54) deal with this issue.

On the other hand, dealing with finances and healthcare are both significant trouble for all. Indeed, sorting out finance is biggest problem for the youngest age-group (people from age 18-34) and places in the second for the rest. Besides, people also worry about healthcare, while it takes the highest place in both middle- and oldest age-groups.

In conclusions, living overseas cause some trouble for all, but finding schools for children causes least trouble for them.

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