To growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Dubitably, technology plays an integral role in our life. With increasing the online shops might traditionally stores in towns and cities will be closer. In my opinion, people have more tendency to shopping online and I agree with this issue.
In the past people spent most of their time to shopping. Growing the technology especially online shops help them to save their time. Not only can spend less time to buy their needs but also, it helps them to save their money because besides don’t any payment to taxies most sites have offer that lead save more money. Different online shops allow people to have a wide range of selection to choose in minimum time. Hence, people prefer use online shops. unfortunately, development the online shops lead to close stores and markets in the future. This makes some people loss their job.
Another point is helps vendors to sell their goods and products in villages and towns. They can gain more money in minimum time from their buyer. Although the sellers live in small towns which far from cities and people less known them, online shops can represent them to other people who live all around the world which is most important of online shops advantages. For example, the best saffron related to a small city in Mashhad, but no one don’t know this city while by online shops they could be famous and now all countries use their saffron product.
In conclusion, human by nature is comfortable and the world toward this direction. Growing the technology led to increase online shops which people have liked and the rate of use of these shops raise rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offered'.
Suggestion: offered
...t any payment to taxies most sites have offer that lead save more money. Different on...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... Hence, people prefer use online shops. unfortunately, development the online shops lead to c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll countries use their saffron product. In conclusion, human by nature is comfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82246376812 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23868188838 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1994698634 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27923686613 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956667937405 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941775702613 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182474562628 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459875452593 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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