The chart below shows the number of man and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Male part-time education membership showed the fluctuation in 1970/71 with 1 million people, 850 thousand people in 1980/81 and 925 thousand people in 1990/91. Otherwise female part-time education membership exhibited the rise steadily began 750 thousand people in 1970/71, 850 thousand people in 1980/81 and 1.1 million people in 1990/91.
Male full-time education membership display the continued to increase with 100 thousand people in 1970/71, 175 thousand people in 1980/81 and 275 thousand in 1990/91. And then female full-time revealed also the continued to rise with 50 thousand people in 1970/71, 250 thousand people in 1980/81 and 300 thousand people in 1990/91.
Overall the chart shows that most people who have followed in part-time education namely in 1970/71 of male with 1 million people and female membership in 1990/91 with 1.1 million people, then the largest number of people in full-time education in 1990/91 with 275 thousand people of male membership and there were around 300 thousand people of female membership.
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