The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of the daily internet users of 5 different age groups in the UK between 2003 and 2006.
Overall, internet usage had a tendency to decline in terms of age. It can be seen that the older people got, the less internet they utilized. More remarkably, adults who aged 18-28 years old spent much time on surfing the internet on a daily basis rather than other categories during a period of 4 examined years.
According to the chart, there was a significant difference among age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday. To be more specific, the UK's internet users were prone to decrease according to their age groups. While the young ( from 18 to 28 years old) was the leading group in terms of the proportion of daily internet usage with at least 60% of the total, these figures for other age groups were lower with only average 10% for the adults who aged 66 and over.
Furthermore, during a period from 2003 to 2006, the year 2003 witnessed the lowest data in the percentage of people using internet services. These figures only reached 60% at the 18-28 year-old groups and gradually went down at around 7% for elderly group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... groups in the UK who used the internet everyday. To be more specific, the UKs internet ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to their age groups. While the young from 18 to 28 years old was the leading ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38820694838 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5986433661 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42785233354 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186891207672 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134540196455 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265156485417 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895725203657 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.