the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet every day from 2003-2006.
The following bar chart visualizes the proportion of matured citizens utilizing internet from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, a large rate of citizens whose ages from 16 to 24 makes up the majority. Meanwhile, inhabitants from 65 to above was the least.
Turning to the ages group 16 to 24, in both 2003 and 2004, 80% of them used internet, it was significant compared to other ages groups. Especially, it went up to 100% in 2005 and declined to 90% in 2006. Dwellers from 25 to 44 utilizing internet service went up gradually from 50% in 2003 to 80% in 2006.
In terms of 45 to 54 group, which had the same pattern status with the previous one. Particularly, 60% of adults from 2003 to 80%, which was similar to 25- to 44-year-old people. Proportion of senior citizens from 55 to 64 was fluctuated in 3 years of the period, which is around 30%, then going up to 50% in 2006. Lastly,
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old group from 65 to above was slightly fluctuated too, which was around 18% to 20% from 2004 to 2006
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- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet every day from 2003 2006
- Social media is becoming more and more popular with young people these days Why do you think this is What are the advantages and disadvantages of social media for young people Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 84
- Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema Some think they should not be regulated Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet every day from 2003 2006
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet every day from 2003 2006 78
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48691099476 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56226964505 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2693552688 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251704632967 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10628261485 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635571097116 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129450545357 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807940429539 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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