Social media is becoming more and more popular with young people these days.
Why do you think this is? What are the advantages and disadvantages of social media for young people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, with the development of technology, social media is more and more well-known with young generation. From my perspective, there are several reasons why it develops so rapid, and it has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed below.
At the beginning, there are a number of comprehensions that social media is trendy in nowadays. Initially, with the development of technology, young citizens have a tendency to approach information by internet rather than read newspapers because of its convenience. For example, with a smartphone with accessing to network, inhabitants can find immediately anything in it with a large number of fields such as showbiz, sports or English learning. Besides, a tremendous of social network such as Facebook, Instagram have their own ways to attract users to utilize more, which is a substantial key to decide the revenue. For instance, TikTok is a typical application, it will evaluate the previous video watched by users. Specifically, videos would be arranged by different level to find next video to appeal continuously citizens.
Although social media platform can definitely appeal customers, with correctly use it, netizens may have the large number of benefits and vice versa. Specifically, with a wide range of information in communal platform, users would like to have a lot of references and from that they can widen their knowledge. For example, there are variety of students self-study in civil media, and it was improved their skills a lot. In contrast, with the familiar tremendous range information sources, dwellers who are not aware of which is correct or incorrect will be lost in it. It can lead to several misunderstandings. For instance, a number of organizations officially post a lot of post to separate others, which is negative effect.
In conclusion, there are various of comprehension to explain the fame of social media. Subsequently, it still has advantage and disadvantage. Hence it should be used more precisely.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...prehensions that social media is trendy in nowadays. Initially, with the development of tec...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...an find immediately anything in it with a large number of fields such as showbiz, sports or Engli...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t still has advantage and disadvantage. Hence it should be used more precisely.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29467084639 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14877447774 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1876087573 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219772917571 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688526449873 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590447390242 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149027506762 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425217778645 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...prehensions that social media is trendy in nowadays. Initially, with the development of tec...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...an find immediately anything in it with a large number of fields such as showbiz, sports or Engli...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t still has advantage and disadvantage. Hence it should be used more precisely.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29467084639 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14877447774 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1876087573 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219772917571 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688526449873 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590447390242 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149027506762 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425217778645 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.