Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema Some think they should not be regulated Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema. Some think they should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is felt that the authorities should restrict the extent of brutality in movies on TV and at the theatre. Meanwhile, savage movies are thought not to be prohibited. From my point of view, in spite of its drawbacks that bring the audience under a certain age, it should be kept like a symbol of typical action film.
On the one hand, several cinematics and TV series with violent content should be considered as trivial content that makes viewers more fascinating. Generally, all kinds of film genres such as horror, sci-fi, romantic, and comedy are created for entertaining purposes to boost their profit as well as brutal movies. For example, there are various savage movies that are successful with a number of series of fighting scenes such as Fast and Furious, the mission impossible and others like this, which are famous for fantastic martial arts and especially attract a lot of moviegoers. Furthermore, several brutal scenes help the plot of the screen a lot, which can make a moment to change to other situations that are not familiar with the previous landscape without annoying watchers.
On the other hand, violent content can actually affect citizens especially in the younger generation, which can have an impact on most. With the development of the internet in recent times, youngsters easily watch it on social media such as youtube or facebook, or even in public like movie theaters. As a consequence, kids and teenagers may have several mental disorders. However, more popularly, picking up several techniques from films to real life is a problem. For instance, several adolescents or even adults imitate character behaviors in movies to cause trouble or even commit a crime.
In conclusion, prohibiting totally brutal factors in several kinds of films is not an excellent notion in the developing cinematics industry. However, it could cause serious impact to watchers, especially youngsters. So, it will be better if authorities just restrict it partially.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...authorities just restrict it partially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14860681115 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76842513812 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6351128447 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806736070812 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287818371754 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361726819762 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579774972668 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505753766865 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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