The chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie chart demonstrates the percentage of five types of book sold by a bookseller over the time period between 1972 and 2012.
Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while the popularity of adult fiction books grew over the period in question, and that children fiction remainly high throughout of the number of biography book intrusted fell sharply. Travel book figure. Travel figure saw an increase followed by decrease.
With regard to children's fiction and biography starting figures were roughly identical at 20 and 15 percent sold respectively. However, where as, the former climbed to reached at the 25 percent in 2012, before levelling of for remainder of the period, the letter peaked at 8 percent and then slipped to half of this figure in 2012.
Turning to journey book, travel book stayed consistently popular, after 2 decade figure remainly between 1972 and 1992 through the period. Other's popularity was nearly as high as travel books in first half of the decade studied, with the number of adult fiction rising from 20 percent to 25, but 1972 to 2012 saw books number crash to 2 percent, a figures which had not changed by 2012.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... 15 percent sold respectively. However, where as, the former climbed to reached at the 2...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'figure' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'figures'.
Suggestion: figures
...ed consistently popular, after 2 decade figure remainly between 1972 and 1992 through ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a figure' or simply 'figures'?
Suggestion: a figure; figures
...12 saw books number crash to 2 percent, a figures which had not changed by 2012.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, then, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87817258883 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46748548726 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3708059405 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258355618133 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13011268153 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151173819198 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205134443497 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182087114209 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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