The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Tee Dos on Mon, 11/04/2019 - 14:55

the given bar chart gives information about the portion of homeownership and tenants in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the trend of owning a house increase significantly over the given period, while renting accommodation reduced over the same time period. The highest proportion of homeownership was in 2011while the renting of houses was most prevalent in 1918. It is also clear from the graph that more people rented their homes when compared to those who are landlords.

the proportion of homeowners in 1918 stood at 20% of households and this started to see a dramatic increase in the following decades to come. By 1991, the percentage of house owners had reached almost 70%with marginal increase 10 years later after which there was a slight decline by the year 2011.

On the other hand, the proportion of people who rent their homes started at a very high rate (almost 80% of households)in 1918 but the trend showed majorly a downward trend throughout the given time frame. Although there was an initial fluctuation between 1918 and 1953 which subsequently started declining rapidly over the next 40 years before showing a mild increase between 2001 and 2011. Interestingly, there was an equal percentage of household landlords and tenants in 1971.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04128440367 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70826014395 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.515758006 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203538658771 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848898455272 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614525908213 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136648906123 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688308569297 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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