The line graph illustrates the proportion of viewers of distinct age who went to cinema once a month or more in an European country over 11 years.
Overall, all age groups from seven years old to more than 35 years old witnessed an upward trend over 11 years. While the proportion of people in group age 7-14 was the highest, that of people of 35 and over who went to the cinema once a month or more ranked last position.
In 2000, the percentage of viewers of four age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country rose dramatically. From the year of 2001, there are difference among four groups. People in groups of 35 and over, 25-35 and 7-14 decreased strongly and then increased back in 2004. Meanwhile, from 2001 to 2004, the proportion of viewers in 15-24 group continuously rose to more than 30%.
In 2005, all four age groups showed an upward trend. Besides, there was an fluctuation of viewers of all age groups between 2006 and 2009. Both viewers of 15-24 and 7-14 who went to the cinema once a month or more in this country strongly increased, with more than 10% and 20% in 2010. While percentage of 25-35 and 35 and over still rose, those of 15-24 and 7-14 witnessed an downward trend in 2011.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: hannahng
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... went to cinema once a month or more in an European country over 11 years. Overa...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...wed an upward trend. Besides, there was an fluctuation of viewers of all age group...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rose, those of 15-24 and 7-14 witnessed an downward trend in 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43421052632 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32366334854 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7462578274 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431550646885 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183736765325 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146824927177 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298014119187 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053741290414 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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