Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With the advancement of commerce and trade, nowadays people can buy any product they like,even from a different country. This results in countries being less different from one another. While this can lead to increasing harmony among different nations, this essay however believes it to be a negative development because it will end up in loss of cultural diversity.
It is thought by some that increase in similarity between countries, due to use of same products like clothes, footwear and food can strengthen the bond between different societies because people will get to know the different specialities of a foreign culture and respect it. For instance, Despite a rivalry between Ireland and Britain,people of both the countries have respectful relations because of similar clothing and cuisines. It is this reason why few consider it a positive thing but this essay believes otherwise because it is in the favour of society to stick to its cultural heritage.
By imitating other societies, their is always a threat to a country’s own centuries old heritage because its survival primarily depend on its acceptance among people. If it is not adapted and instead another country’s norms are followed in wearing and cuisines,it will result in loss of diversity among nations. This is exemplified by a change in clothing trend in Bali where people shifted from their traditional wear to western clothes, because of foreign clothing outlets there.New generation doesn’t have a clue about the traditional clothing.
In conclusion, by purchasing of similar items by people in different countries,they are becoming alike which although can somehow increase the bond of respect between nations,this essay doesn’t consider it to be positive development because it will damage cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44128113879 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04612199093 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1661301648 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.9 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211055611456 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879346418653 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326137162474 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132992511089 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037594534828 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.