The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000,, with projections till 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart indicates the proportion of global population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 and their expected population till 2050.
At first glance we can see that India and China contained much more of the world population than other countries. It is also expected that in 2050, apart from India, the population in other countries will drop.
Obviously China is the most crowded country with over a quarter of the whole world population in 1950. This number reduced steadily in 2000 but still remained the highest of all. 50 years later the population in China is predicted to drop to just under one fifth of the world population in that time.
India also has a huge amount of residents, which occupied 15% of the global population in 1950, but this figure rose to about 19% 50 years later and is expected to increase further till 2050, which an estimated amount of just over 20% in 2050. The USA contained exactly 10% of the world’s population in 1950 but slightly dropped in the next 50 years and is expected to remain stagnant afterward. Meanwhile Japan’s population also decreased in the 1950-2000 period and is anticipated to drop even further in the next 50 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... expected to remain stagnant afterward. Meanwhile Japan’s population also decreased in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82926829268 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52239935633 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5460694731 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248654635634 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120307075818 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838695625827 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183005238791 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790691640088 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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