The diagram provides information, how is wasted paper recycled in six stages.
First, waste paper is collected from public paper banks and businesses, than is manually scanned to avoid present of non-recyclable paper. In third stage, all suitable paper for recycling is transported to paper mill where in following stage is cleared from unwanted materials such a staples. This stage also contains its cleaning and pulping. In fifth stage of recycling process, paper pulp passing through de-inking and glue removal before its pretty last stage, when machines manufacture usable paper from clear pulp.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a staple' or simply 'staples'?
Suggestion: a staple; staples
...is cleared from unwanted materials such a staples. This stage also contains its cleaning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 508.0 965.302439024 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 93.0 196.424390244 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4623655914 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.10542279907 3.73543355544 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62519785467 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.741935483871 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.52010101 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289384412311 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158463646937 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908864006471 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24242687022 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00665653038996 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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