the provided bar charts illustrates the coffee and tea purchasing and consumption habit in five different Australian cities .the following report intends to compare and analyze the above-mentioned topic based on the data provided
Generally speaking, buying coffee or tea in a cafe remains the most popular option for nearly all cities included, with Adelaide as an exception .Adelaide citizens loves buying coffee in a cafe and buying instant coffee almost equally.purchase of instant coffee is the least welcomed options among all surveyed cities.
When it comes to comparing between the cities, Sydney ,Melbourne and Hobart consumes markedly more coffee and tea from cafe compared with the rest , Sydney and Melbourne also consume more fresh coffee at around 43% in contrast with only 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide. Buying instant coffee is most widely accepted in Bristane and Hobart ,with around 53% of city residents choosing this option in last 4 weeks.
In conclusion, we can discover that Australian cities differ from each others quite considerably, more research should be done to uncover more about this topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35028248588 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70079850911 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.99846625 43.030603864 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.75 112.824112599 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196121919681 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102313242613 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690132517681 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117329238128 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491196523111 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.2329268293 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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