To buy or to rent a home? this is a very important question to ask, in many countries, thanks to the soaring housing price, to buy a home is now considered a life changing decision, as the mortgage could take over 30 years in average to be repaid! Especially in Asia, it is generally believed that being a home owner is crucial. This essay intend to delve into the reason behind this phenomenon and whether it is good or bad.
To begin with, it is beneficial to understand what constitute this belief. Culturally speaking, those culture developed from agriculture society tend to hold this thought. This is because in ancient time, owning lands means owning wealth and stability, the whole family's faith depends on the farmland they have and they tend to live in a single place for their whole lives. That's why owning a home instead of renting one means guaranteed future. Of course, nowadays we do not own a flat to farm, but it remains a valuable asset allowing us to gain wealth, we could sell them in good price or we could simply let the flat.
The essence of capitalism is that one could enjoy what one earn. If you pay off the mortgage, you could enjoy being a landlord and the passive income. Passive income is many people's dream because it means stability, even if you loss your job, you could still make a living by the capital gain from the asset. This is good for the society as it grants incentive for all the hardworking citizens. Whereas, it is not without drawbacks as it creates housing problem. Government needs to make sure the rapidly rising property price and rent do not exploit the basic human right of accommodation by means like rent control.
To put it all in a nutshell, I would like to emphasize that properties trade is a normal and healthy activities in capitalism. It satisfies human's need, it helps economy to thrive. However, it has to be controlled as it will also inflict pain especially on the glassroot class who might not be able to cope with expensive rent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, whereas, as to, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60224089636 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51418622511 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6602348152 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231909662416 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682411517185 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501776995307 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126896660176 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424656883499 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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