The bar graph provides information about the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea purchasing and drinking habits in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart are Australia cities.
The first option is bought fresh coffee in last 4weeks. In Sydney has 44 percent of city resident and has almost same as Melbourne which is 42 percent of city residents. However, in Brisbane and aldelaide has decreased and remain approximately 34 percentage of city residents. Furthermore, in Hobart has increased slowly almost 38 percent of city residents.
The second option is bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks and it city residents has fluctuated from 45 percent in sydney to 54 percentage in Hobart.
The thrid option is went to a cafe for coffee or tea in the last 4weeks. In sydney has 61 percentage of city residents and then it has increased 63 percent. After the period in Brisbane and Adelaide both percentage of city residents has decreased straightly from 55 percent to 49 percent. Contrary, in Hobart has climbed dramatically 62 percentage of city residents.
Briefly, it can be clear that there is an upward trend on the went of a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks.
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...s 42 percent of city residents. However, in Brisbane and aldelaide has decreased ...
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...ee in last 4 weeks and it city residents has fluctuated from 45 percent in sydney...
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...from 55 percent to 49 percent. Contrary, in Hobart has climbed dramatically 62 pe...
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...went of a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, furthermore, however, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93596059113 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80820152012 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7660513878 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153402736114 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646154348466 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662925072789 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103560353628 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836126643019 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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