Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that, some community argue that the sports faciis the best idea for improving public health while others believe that, it would have just few effective on public health and there need other moves.i think physical exercise is good for all types of age but also it has not enough for public health for this issue need other requirements.
On the one hand physical exercise can be help health and maintain Fitness and also reduce Stress and brain started activities faster than other time.like, uk or other countries people always doing exercise everydat that's why they get energy and age of 70 years thet look like energetic. Along with, Sports facilities mean physical exercise so it has few number of playing system it may be uses some equipment. After using this instrument public can practicing their physical exercise such as, GYM give a service on physical exercise. Furthermore, sports facilities can continue the age of younger or middle age and doing this exercise every day than people can maintain their life and alive long time. Moreover, physical exercise help reduced fate and keep active public health if any one continue that facilities then they would not fall in sickness. Besides, they do any kind of work they want then public work any where earn there money to their ownself and also they can service their life easily.
On the other hand, physical exercise service people most of the time doing business through this sports facilities. For example, fitness sports places are taking fee for their service. Additionally, transport facility should be required for public health after doing the physical exercise they have to go home that time if they are walk for going home then get sick early rather than use transport they can maintain their time management and they can go home early. In additional, for sports exercise has needed equipment to continuing that benefits but some people does not afford to buy this instrument. So, that's why they that types of equipment would be replaced in the park when people go for walk that time they can doing their exercise on the park there equipment freely. Besides, consuming food price then the public can buy healthy food for their health after that they can concern their health through all sides like practising exercise. And, also established a play ground for every ages people they can practice their all types of health exercise in morning and evening time.
To con, sports facilities can be improve public health but it would be effect little for this happen there have needed some development. If other facility added with this physical facility then people can get their desire result.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96659242762 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27280641057 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447661469933 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9493617176 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.375 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.107697717856 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814935371614 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224571583378 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872024313595 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.