The given pie charts provided information about the age of the habitants of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and estimates for 2050.
We can see, in 2000 at yemen the highest percentage of age was Between 0 and 14 years old within 50.1% whereas, in 2050 the population or projections will be decreased 37.0%. Moreover, the habitant from 15 to 59 years old was 46.3% while, it will be increased 57.3% in 2050. Along with, 60 plus years old population was in 2000 within 3.6% alternatively in 2050 it will increased 5.7% respectively people live in yemen.
In Italy, the majority population was lived from 15 to 59 years old people within 61.6% in 2000 while 2050 it will decreased 46.2% in that age estimated. Furthermore, the lower percentage of population in Italy was between 0 and 14 years old people lived there within 14.3% in 2000. Even, in 2050 will decreased 11.5% within that age. Besides, in 2000 the population had the age of 60+ years old people within 24.1% whereas in 2050 it will be increased dramatically 42.3%.
To conclude, it is clear that there is an upward trend on the age of 60 pluse years old people or more in Both countries after projections.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting 73
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 56
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might this be the case do you think this is a positive or negative situation 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64734299517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60257826304 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8197471421 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197156646837 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112628363644 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858976190695 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156128008474 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111157551916 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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