The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrate the information in percentage about people’s habit of buying and drinking coffee and tea in five main cities of Australia in last 4 weeks.
As shown in the bar, in all five cities people are more habitual of drinking coffee or tea at café rather than buying. Again, in buying habit also rate of buying instant coffee is higher than buying fresh coffee in all five cities.
In Sydney, People’s habit of visiting cafe for coffee or tea is around 61% which is higher then both buying instant and fresh coffee. Then this rate slightly increased by 2% in Melbourn. However, the figure experienced decreasing trend in Brisbane with approximately 56%. Again, by decreasing trend Adelaide rate of drinking coffee or tea is almost 49% , which is also the lowest rate among all 5 cities. Hobart rate rose to approximately 63%.
Buying instant coffee in five Australian cities has increasing trend. In Sydney, around 46% of people buy instant coffee, and it increase in Melbourne and Brisbane at around 48% and 53% respectively. However, the figure experienced a slightly decline in Adelaide by approximately 3%. Again, the percentage rose upto around 54% in Hobart.
The lowest % of habit among three is buying fresh coffee in all five cities. It is continuously in decreasing trend in Sydney, Melbourn, Brisbane with around 44%,43% and 39% respectively. Adelaide remain steady with Brisbane and Hobart rate rose upto around 39%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06694560669 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68693906427 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451882845188 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9586422315 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7333333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241617593089 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943956368076 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117244056232 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187011458125 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129001621277 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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