The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates residents' habits in consuming coffee in five distinctive cities of Australia.
Overall, the proportion of citizens going to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks was highest in almost all cities, except for Melbourne. It is worth noting that instant coffee was more common than fresh coffee.
The percentage of people who went to a cafe in last 4 weeks was highest in Melbourne, around 64%. The figure of Sydney was less by 3%. Regarding citizens purchasing instant coffee in last 4 weeks, these countries had figures which were around 46% to 48%. While the proportion of residents buying fresh coffee in Melbourne was much less than that of instant coffee at about 43%, the figure of Sydney had insignificant difference.
When looking into the remaining cities, Hobart had the highest percentage of people accessing a cafe in last 4 weeks, nearly 63%, followed by Brisban and Adelaide at approximately 55% and 50% respectively. The figures for citizens purchasing instant coffee in Hobart and Brisban were less, at around 53% to 54%. In contrast, Adelaide was the only one city having the proportion of citizens buying instant coffee which was highest among 3 categories, nearly 50%. Meanwhile, the figures of residents purchasing fresh coffee were much less, around 34% to 37%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07339449541 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70573774587 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9688597488 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109672463961 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511339819421 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048008942601 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933660866555 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518483374914 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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