Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, it is argued that one of the most essential subjects should be taught at school is History, while many people believe that some fields such as Science and Technology are more vital. This essay will discuss both views before reaching the conclusion that all subjects have an equal role in education.
On the one hand, I believe that people could not deny the importance of History due to its values. To be specific, learning this subject helps students have a better understanding of their culture. For example, all Vietnamese students are taught about not only their language but also its root which has been passed on for many years. Furthermore, the old could use history to increase the national pride of the young generation. Particularly, students would be proud of their ancestors who fought for their country or united to overcome all impediments. Vietnamese residents can be proud of how their predecessors won in a large number of wars to preserve the country from enemies. Clearly, history occupies a crucial position in the training program.
On the other hand, I think the contribution of some subjects like Science or Technology is equally important. Advances in these fields give people chances to broaden their knowledge in a fast and convenient way. In other words, people have several tools such as digital applications or softwares to learn about different countries without visiting them. For instance, a Korean citizen could look for information about England on the internet or take an English online course while not having to go abroad. Moreover, science and technology contribute to saving humans from diseases. In more detail, knowledge in these subjects is necessary for researchers to invent sorts of cures for treatment. Take the Covid-19 pandemic as an example, the invention of its vaccine has helped to reduce the number of patients in the world. It seems that learning about science and technology can not be neglected at all.
To sum up, although some people still doubt the roles of some subjects in education, I personally believe that all of those have the same importance to people. While history teaches about a country’s values, science and technology could help to increase the humans’ life quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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...ies without visiting them. For instance, a Korean citizen could look for informat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69336359422 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9424193487 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296089267591 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882763341586 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792940624298 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194206108259 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618014359772 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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