To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowl

To some people studying of history since unimportant and is not crucial for their education. On the contrary, others believe that a human can not consider himself an educated person if he does not know his own history.
History is the origin of all knowledge. Russian writer Leonid Andreev said: “To go forward, often lookback, otherwise you will forget where you come from and where you will need to go”. History afford us to understand and know how, when our home country was created, who has done the main contribution. Nowadays due to modern technologies, there are a lot of opportunities to learn history, especially for students and children. For instance, they can use internet to search and find some material about historical events or prominent figures. Also visiting artificial museums can be the best decision. As results, children will have a real picture of any historical events. The other important moments of learning history is that it provides us information about our ancestors, what lifestyle they had. I think we have to know old tradition of our nation.
Of course, parenting ignoring history I'm not teaching it two children will have a lot of problems in the future. So the main drawback is that people just will not be able to know they are, why they live and what's their role in this life is. It will be the same as living without name.
In conclusion, no one can deny that studying the past is valuable enough, so that children and adults should never refuse to learn the history. If the past is preserved, future will be in safety.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82592592593 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61377851671 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4390650758 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235674353765 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704844311478 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367656724105 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134600006367 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193472624613 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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