The provided bar chat below sketches out how many people residing in five different Australian cities bought coffee and tea in the last four weeks and their drinking habits.
Overall, the percentage of citizens purchasing fresh coffee was lower than that of individuals buying instant one. In addition, the number of people going to a cafe for coffee or tea was highest in Melbourne and Hobart.
At first glance, fresh coffee in all five cities experienced the lowest figures, which were just under 35% for Brisbane and Adelaide, 40% for Hobart and 45% for Melbourne and Sydney. Meanwhile, instant coffee witnessed a contrast percentage, with Hobart accounting for highest figure ( nearly 55%) and Sydney taking up lowest proportion ( over 45%).
It can be seen from the chart that the number of city dwellers going to a cafe for coffee or tea in Melbourne and Hobart were highest, at south of 65%. Similarly, the percentage of those who came to cafe for coffee or tea in Sydney, Brisbane and Adelaide were at north of 60%, over 55% and approximately 50% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58604994557 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0633394379 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158483771125 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833251067274 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546625617952 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112327144771 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554627631263 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.