It is said that the violence in the media can increase the violence in the social life. I partly agree with this statement.
Violence in the media can greatly impact people's attitude towards life. We are living in a modern society with the dramatic flourishment of technology. That is the reason why most of the information or data on the Internet has a strong effect on us. Violent information is not an exception. When an individual see something that is toxic on the Internet, they tend to follow or even get a phobia, especially the person who is unable to aware of the danger. A secondary student is a good example. She saw a new video about a boy who murdered his father because he had criticized him. This girl torture her brother in a crucial way untill he died. Yellow jounalisms want to make their frontpage headlines so they are ready to put tons of stories which is not real and baffles the residents.
On the other hand, not all the people are easy to be affected by the factors around them. Some individuals with high self- awareness allow themselves to take in the informative data. When they saw some videos or news that is related to violence, they will avoid and prohibit that website.
Inconclusion, using media is akin to reading a book. If you know how to avoid the toxic and meaningless information, you can avoid bad situations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61825726141 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63880189209 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634854771784 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2394486485 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5625 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144833819769 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441684416648 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765454202424 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109426450859 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102671256398 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.