The elimination of species and biodiversity is said to be the consequence of the effects that people have on the ecosystem worldwide. This problem happens due to some reasons, and effective measures should be taken to mitigate it.
Several reasons can explain why humans have such detrimental impacts on the ecosystem of the Earth. Firstly, the activities of human in some fields such as industry, agriculture,..may result in loads of adverse influences on the floral and fauna. Not only does overconsumption of pesticides in crops of farmers poisons the underground water nearby but gases and toxic perfume from the factories and vehicles in the major cities are also the leading causes of air pollution and urban heat. Secondly, individuals that hunt animals and cut down trees illegally might take away the inhabitats and refuges of may species, which helps them to bring home the bacon by selling animals' skin or precious part for the wealthy ones. A telling example is that polar bears are on the verge of extinction since the substantial rise in the heat has melted many ice cubes or the red panda has now been in the restriction of hunting or catching in many countries, especially China.
However, there are various workable solutions that governments could take to tackle the problem. The initial solution is that authorities in each country or province should apply more regulations in order to tighten the security of plants and animals. Moreover, the people who hunt animals or cut down plants without the agreement from the government should receive a harsh punishment. Another mesures is conveying powerful message about the vital role of the biodiversity to humans through the social media, which is likely to help raise the awareness of residents.
In conclusion, this problem stems from several reasons, but governments could implement a range of measures to address this problem.
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- The maps below show an industrial area in the town Norbiton and planned future development of the site 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79247710531 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5753427632 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130026217372 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04580777031 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486348439736 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686376971345 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460879126574 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.