The given chart illustrates the data of a survey conducted about residents’ consumption of refreshing beverages like tea and coffee, during the period of a month in five major cities of Australia.
Overall, people prefer to visit a cafeteria to drink coffee or tea in each of the five cities. Also, residents chose to buy instant coffee over fresh coffee.
Majority of residents (above 60%) visited a cafe in the last 4 weeks in cities like Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart. Also, in Brisbane and Adelaide, the proportion of people who visited a cafe in last month was 56% and 48% respectively.
The percentage of people who bought instant coffee was higher than people who bought fresh coffee in every city. People bought twice as much instant coffee than fresh coffee in cities like Brisbane and Adelaide. However, in the city of Sydney customers of both kinds of coffee were similar in proportion (44% and 46%).
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- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly cooked food does this practicr has more advantages than disadvantages 61
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 61
- using advanced technology in agriculture such as chemical fertilizers and machinery has resulted in producing more food some people however think these technologies have negative effects what are the advantages and this advantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92258064516 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56059956559 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2792985048 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198736898496 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924448970761 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524293358284 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124818594321 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539610518221 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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