The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart gives survey information about the number of persons traveled to four different vacation spots(Museums & Galleries, Historic houses & Monuments, Wildlife parks & zoos, finally theme parks) in Britain during the year 1999.
Overall, People visited more Theme parks among the four spot also the museum and galleries were visited slightly lower than this. It is observed less interest has been shown to the other two categories, which accounts only quarter of the total tourist's numbers. Particularly Blackpool pleasure beach hit a high percentage of interest in amusement parks.
Firstly with regards to the theme park it stands at a peak value of 38% out of this Blackpool pleasure beach visited by 47% of people which is more and then Alton towers viewed by 17% and also the Pleasureland situated at Southport attracted 16%. Finally, the Chessington world and Legoland visited by least around 10%.
Likewise, approximately 37% visited Art Galleries marks the second highest attracted spots in overall. Historic houses & monuments(16%), wildlife parks(9%) combined makes only quarter of the total tourists in 1999. It is observed only the top two strike a 75% peoples popular choices for their trips that makes around three fourth of total.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...hich accounts only quarter of the total tourists numbers. Particularly Blackpool pleasur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37055837563 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63674082311 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5480475583 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.555555556 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211227229276 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729527960381 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050017774735 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117745715408 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322111127421 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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