The provided charts reveal the poll results of citizens who attended several different sightseeing in Britain along with visited places in the theme parks at the end of the 20th century.
Overall, it is noticeable that theme parks and cultural establishments were the most widespread choice between people in British, as 38% and 37% respectively frequented the abovementioned locations. Worth to mention the parks that most individuals visited, which are Blackpool Pleasure Beach.
At the end of the 20th century, the most popular option among touristic attractions were Theme Parks and Museums with Galleries, taking the major chunks of the whole graph. Furthermore, historical monuments and buildings were the next the most visited since approximately 16% of people in 1999 attended such places. Meanwhile, the least activity and place to attend were wildlife parks and zoos because only 9% of people were estimated to visit.
With regards to the most lucrative sightseeing such as theme parks, Blackpool Pleasure Beach, Alton Towers, and Pleasureland consisted in the top three most visited theme parks 47%,17%,16% respectively. Whereas Chessington World of Adventures along with Legoland separated the last 20% of people having an interest in those parks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...e poll results of citizens who attended several different sightseeing in Britain along with visit...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d theme parks 47%,17%,16% respectively. Whereas Chessington World of Adventures along w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51030927835 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86501967912 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6927700644 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.625 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136600963883 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609753754516 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488926426355 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862591528564 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572224393422 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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