With each century, or even a decade there are some novelties in families in the world. Thus, in the current years, the overall hierarchy and roles in the families have had noticeable adjustments. There are several upgrades such as the single-mother concept that takeover contemporary families and personally, I consider it to be an optimistic development.
In the past, families have always consisted of standardized members such as two parents with their offspring, which are nuclear families, and in the 20th century undeniably, there was a prevalence of those. However, as traditional views are being dissolved, it is no longer surprising to observe a single-parent family with a couple of children. Furthermore, with each year, the number of single-mother families has been rocketing due to a desire to pursue education or take full participation in developing a successful career. A vivid example would be Park Chaeyeong from South Korea, a single mother who nurtures two infants, has stated that she feels man's involvement or even presence is not a major thing to institute a family. She proceeded by declaring that, she could sustain her family on her own.
In my view, forming a new hierarchy in the family signifies the shift of the mind of the society. In other words, people began an eradication of stagnant views that derived from mid-ages which possibly results in sex equality as matriarchy found dominance on several continents such as Europe and North America. It implies that there would be less sexism towards women in society, less discrimination of females population, and fewer stereotypes that diminish lives.
In conclusion, there are a plethora of novelties in the family structure, such as single-mother families that lead to the curtailment of gender-related discrimination, mainly towards women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31724137931 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13376001682 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6905534555 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702060104721 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285244040349 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194628670986 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451251124732 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197211023511 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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