Some individuals tend to believe that their kids must be motivated to possess a spirit of competition whereas others contradict by saying that offspring’s who are taught cooperation turn out to be better persons in future. Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs, however, I personally opine with the later one.
To commence with, competition among children encourage them for putting more efforts in their work. Their fields of interest as well as shortcomings can be analyzed in a better way and hence worked upon. Therefore, various schools organize host of events such as quizzes, singing/dancing contests etc. in order to discover their talents. However, being competitive makes their wonderful childhood stressful and foster frustration and envy. As a result, they can never find joy in the accomplishments of others.
On the other hand, juveniles nurtured with collusion evolve as more useful grownups. Firstly, they are able to enjoy their childhood as there is no space for jealousy. Secondly, spirit of team work, collaboration is incubated which are essential attributes for leading a merry life. Forthright, teachers and parents must involve them in group activities for instance football and crafting etc. In addition to this, it boosts their social skills. Examples should be set in home for them.
To conclude, on the basis of arguments aforementioned above, I reiterate, being competitive has its own merits for children but they become better descendants if cultivated with attributes like cooperation.
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 56
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003 2006
- The chart below shows rite expenditure on three categories with different proportions among residents in the UK in 2004 84
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003 2006 15
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96221055262 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689814814815 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0994876917 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181970166441 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547123152518 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066277686596 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827762927324 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512604594354 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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